Comparisons

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98055
United States
47° 27' 44.4132" N, 122° 12' 19.8216" W

You were Kobe, I was Shaq,
I was your Heisman, but like Reggie, you gave me back,
After all I've done, you still did me wrong,
I was Cleveland, you were Lebron,
You decided to leave me for Miami,
But like Cleveland I'm begging you to head back at me,
I was the fortune that added to your fame,
Me without you is like YoungMoney without Wayne,
You were the superstar and I was just the towel boy,
You got me feeling like Dallas without the Cowboys,
I gave you what you wanted and provided anything you need,
Now I'm feeling lost like Desean Jackson without speed,
Never gave me a reason of why you had to go,
Now we're split up like McNabb and T.O.,
We went perfect together like Game and 50,
But now I'm in a drought like when Iverson left Philly,
I thought our love was like a nice fairy tale, Beauty and the Beast,
But it went in the opposite direction like Kanye East,
I guess what was meant for you wasn't meant for me,
What was meant for us wasn't meant to be.

Comments

Imrahil

I'm not sure if this was intended to be a rap but it could legit pass for one. Love the rhymes and 'comparisons' you made. Kanye East had me cracking up. Really cool stuff.

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