"Christian"<LOVE

So remind me when love became conditional

I’ve been running so hard toward that rainbow in a hurricane i forgot to just wait for rain because were so quick to write love on a tee shirt I swear I’ve fallen in love with every x girl thats got no self respect and a mini skirt

Like Paul said so many times if I have not love I’m nothing. I think the love he’s speaking of is.............not from this world or something

And I swear if mommy and daddy would have found that love
I wouldn’t have had to wish to the stars above.
every second person in America can vouch for me because statistics show love is America’s worst enemy

tell me when did love become conditional

woe to thee Christianity we’ve got hearts of gold but blacking souls because no one wants to love the porn star, homosexual, drug addict and the whore yea i said it the four terms your not supposed to say in side a church and ill say it four times more because this building is a just a meeting place for hypocrisy unless we learn to love like jesus loved unworthy sinners like you and me

Friends do you hear me yet, were as poverty stricken as any other country not in monetary terms but spiritual. Every day our generation is dying more and more and no body cares because its all about me me me and besides haha it makes for good tv.

If we are to be compelled by love
Lets be everything we really are. Dirty discussing vial people who accepted the gift God gave to everyone

And I’ll be the first on to show that I’m not worth it....No!
iI the wages of sin is death than someone must have already paid my debt because I should’a been dead the moment i took a breath
The biggest love i know is one that refuses to let go
He says it so many times
I will change you
I love you
And I will hold you
I close my ears so i can pretend I didn’t hear it
....and so he screams
I SAID
I WILL CHANGE YOU
I WILL LOVE YOU
AND I WILL HOLD YOU

wait wait God i know whats best for me even if that means i up route my seed

CHILD
I WILL CHANGE YOU
I WILL LOVE YOU
and I will hold you

Have I not proven it?

I WILL CHANGE YOU
I WILL LOVE YOU
AND I WILL HOLD YOU

I WILL CHANGE YOU
I WILL LOVE YOU AND THE BEST PART OF ALL IS I WILL I will grow you because your the tree I hoped to grow when planting these seeds, truth be told I would have died if it meant saving only your soul and when the others see you
They will see me

I will change you
I will love you and
I will hold you
Even if that takes for ever for you to believe

Comments

jwiener

Your use of repetition in this poem was a great strategy to get your points across, yet I think the most important line is "statistics show love is America’s worst enemy" because this really speaks to the idea that the relationships we have with others affect our own actions, and what we think of ourselves.

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