Carmen

Lyrical criminal 
she's different from individuals 
the message is never subliminal 
her smile is a miracle 
real far from spiritual 
and 
You think I'm not hearing you 
but, what am I supposed to do 
I'm, holding on tight- 
like couples, in the winter 
And darling 
darling  darling doesn't  have a problem lying to herself cause her liquor top shelf! 
But she's only 17 
shes got a walk so mean ask her  
her name and she'll say Carmen, 
she's so charming, 
the boys the girls they all love Carmen 
 
She says you don't want to be like me 
Living my life 
Getting weed for free
You don't 
Want to live this way
Living a lie is the only thing that pays 
In the winter of her life
The men were her only summer 
The boys the girls
They all want some of her 
They all love Carmen 
 
 
 
but she laughs like God and she shines like a diamond...... 
Her minds
 a gold mine but she's slowly dying 
 
 
Carmen whats your problem I can't help you
I can't solve it 
Saving you from you is almost impossible darling 
 
 Taddy you're soo much more than a body
I got 17 years of experience
I'm asking you to hear me then
Tatyana
Hahhahaha
Ummm my names 
Carmen 
 
With dreams of being married 
She runs to church in her heels and a dress
But she's really running to address
A pastor 
Or a minister
Which ever one would listen her 
You see on top of the steeple is star
You have no idea what it's like 
To seek safety from other people 
Unless you are Carmen 
 

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