Candy apple part two

It was my birthday
And I was looking forward to getting my candy apple
I spent time with my family
Making sure I had some time to spear to go get one
My fiance told me he was taking me with his family
Across the bored
He wanted to get me a gift
I went with
My candy apple....
That's all I had on my mind
Am I not getting one this year?
I'm I going to have to wait ?
But it's something since I've don't since 18
I'm happy I'm with him but he knows how much this means to me....
The shops would be closed by then....
We go out with his family
They show me a good time
I was nervous and scared
It was a new place to me
But in another area of a place I was taken when I was younger
Reason I don't cross the bored
I'm scared to be kidnapped again
But I knew I was safe
I'm with him and his family
We walk around
I got a few gifts
New experiences
But still the apple was on my mind...
It was getting late
It was time to go ...
The shops are closed at this point ..
I'll wait till another time I have free
I hear him say
Oh your candy apple
I didn't forget
Let's turn back and get one for you
I was shocked
He's family smiled and laughed
That was one of the main reasons we were in that area
There candy apples are the biggest they've seen
Wanted to surprise me with one
We got to the corner
They flagged the guy down
He gave them a candy apple
One that was the biggest I've ever seen
They gave it to me and said
We know this was your tradition to yourself
But wanted to show you your not alone
I wanted to cry
Never in my life has someone or at leave there family included
Has ever payed this much attention to the smallest of details
Even my family doesn't really care about this like tradition I made for myself
How I felt so loved
And I got my candy apple in the end
But it was a gift I got myself
It was a gift that was given to me
The smallest change to something done for a long time
Makes a difference
The man who started my little tradition
I hope you can see how far it has gotten
A candy apple on my birthday

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