Can I see what the physical eye cannot detect?


40° 27' 49.2012" N, 3° 44' 57.192" W

                                       Can I Sense What the Physical Eye Cannot Detect ?

                                                      By: Alesiya Walker


When a heart pleads for love,              

Is it because it doesn't know what lies ahead in life?

As blood flows through this vessel like a cove,

It has no way of detecting strive.


The fight for love will lead towards determination,

To keep a bound what is safe, 

Causing a person to hope for expectation,

When the tides of life chafe.


The heart cannot detect wrong doings beforehand, 

If so, it would sway right instead of left.

Trying to control your emotions in alliance like a band,

As you protect what matters most from theft.


Can my eyes discover love emotionally?

Promoting myself to find achievement,

From my heart's desire to gain love hopefully,

Solving problems with God's agreement.



Living in this world as an observer,

And discovering everyone is independent,

Through compassion I learned to be a server,

To love is better for all participating descendants.









This poem is about: 
My family
My community
My country
Our world
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