Caasi

When I first saw your face it inspired me to have thoughts,

Thoughts that I should pursue you .

But usually, a guy like me, I don't do such things.

The actions taken by ordinary dudes aren't part of my ordinary moves.

But, to be with you is what I was aspiring to.

So I tried and to my surprise you acknowledged me.

I was sure rejection was imminent, undoubtedly.

Because typically women are like apples in trees, the good ones to high to reach but not too see.

But over time you showed me your imperfection and I showed you mines,

told me your secrets I told you mine,

ave me your worst I promised to make it better,

gave me your hand I promised to hold  it forever.

Out of all the girls I've been with,

you're the one I could never forget.

I do believe there's a God above,

and he created you for me to love.

He have you to me and none of the rest,

because he knew that, "I", would love you best.

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