Broken Smile

The pretty young girl 

With the flowy black hair

Thinking she belongs nowhere

Her soul hurting 

Just trying to fit in 

Have understanding

Though everywhere she turns 

All she finds is pain 

Another person who turns her away

When all she needs is a smile 

A hey how's your day

Even though she puts on a smile everyday 

You can see the pain behind 

Those beautiful brown eyes

Seeking someone to talk to 

To confide in 

Nothing more than a friend

Who truly cares

So she tries to take her own life

Just to stop the hurt of everyday 

Because death hurts less

But by the grace of the devine above 

An angel was walking beside her that day 

To save the life of an important young soul 

Who was set on this world to make a difference 

To save another soul 

To rid the pain 

From everyone's life she touches

Because she's someone special 

Who understands the pain 

Behind a broken smile

Comments

savigirl14

I can relate to this girl. I hide behind a broken smile

savigirl14

Just remember you are strong and can get through anything you set your mind to do. Please read and comment on my poem "Where Did She Go?" Then you will realize this isn't a battle you have to fight on your own. We will go through this together. <3

auroraborealis93

This poem was for a young friend who I care about deeply. She really scarred everyone . . . 

shelbracullum

I love it! beautiful thank you for sharing your gift with me

shelbracullum

I love it! beautiful thank you for sharing your gift with me

auroraborealis93

I'm glad I could share :-)

Braeden999

Amazing

Bryce Hagenson

I like it thanks for commenting on mine!

Beautifulmess96

Thank you for writing this beautiful poem about me... I have just signed up for this site myself and am enjoying writing the poetry to relieve my feelings... if you could I would greatly aprreciate it if you went to my page and read them

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