In the Breeze

Tue, 07/08/2014 - 13:15 -- Upendi

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I was looking around the corner and I saw your face;

I didn't know what to think of it but I knew it wasn't fake;

I felt a feeling I had never felt before;

Now please say it's not just me. You feel it too. In the breeze?

 

The wind in my hair told you that nothing was for a fool;

The night we met under the willow was true;

You came to me with a kiss on the cheek;

Now please say it's not just me. You feel it too. In the breeze?

 

Five to five stars is how I rate you, possible to be more never less than you;

Nothing say's we're to be apart or only to be together;

You have my heart and so much more;

Now please say it's not just me. You feel it to. In the breeze?

 

Something about the way we speak, we stare, we dance;

Something about it brings me nearer to you;

Life without you would be dull;

Now please say it's not just me.You feel it to. In the breeze? 

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