From my first faltering breath, whispered
Pronounced words bound in abandon
Space in deafening silence
Screams muffled in mourning
Bulging eyes proclaim
Clarity, reined



Wow. Your structure is superb. Only my second poem and I can tell that your strong suit is framing your poems in such a profound way. Kudos to you for that. 

This poem is really simplistic and it allows the audience to get what they needed from the poem and as a poet who hates to intepret my work for other people, I respect the brevity of this poem. Packed with emotion. really good =)

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