My little fish

Thu, 12/05/2013 - 16:55 -- 14norik

My love for you is like casting a line to you.

The farther you swim away the more of a chance the line will break, and I dont want to pull to tight or else that nightmare will come true.

But every little give you gave me made my heart would jump because you lead me to believe that I could catch you.

Until the day you are completely mine, my heart will always jump and I will always smile, even so... When you are mine, I will do the same but will never frown again in your presence.. 

Comments

TrevorJL

I love how you were able to find a way to contrast two things that many would see as unrelated, love and fishing. Nicely done. :D

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