Breaking Point

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I can't say one thing!

Not one damn thing, without you criticizing me!

Just shut up!

You ask what I mean,

I mean Im Fed Up!

You push me for my 'own good',

Well kudos, you're a parent,

You should.

But when is to much?

When I drive to a hill, close my eyes,

And let go of the clutch?

Im taking your phone, you're groun-

BE QUIET! 

ENOUGH IS ENOUGH!

Im tired of trying to please you

Im giving up!

Doing what?

I SAID I'M GIVING UP!

You're unsatisfiable,

So keep trying for what?

 

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Comments

savigirl14

Amazing. Don't be afraid to stand up to authority figures especially if you feel like they are wrong

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