Break The Wall

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Death, Disease, and Lonliness

Abandonment, War, and Fears

All kept behind life's curtain

The cause of so many tears.

 

Do not show my issues

Don't op'n the curtain to peer

Hide the hurt, hide the loss

Do not let them near

 

No! Break that wall, the fourth one there

Show them the worries within

Display the aside of life's deep thoughts

To hear the drop of a pen

 

View my inmost, profound faults

I will convey my smallest fears

I withhold nothing and naught,

and let life's patrons hear.

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