"A Better Way" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 12/2/2008

Location

United Kingdom

Ya Know ....
There HAS TO BE A ... BETTER Way ... !!!

There HAS TO BE A ... BETTER Way ... !!!

There HAS TO BE A ..... BETTER WAY ... !!!!!

Than How We're Living Nowadays .... !!!
NO Forgiving ... Minds Displaced ...
Thinking Things That Lead To HATE ... !?!

Drug Induced Cos' That's The JUICE ...
That New Age Crews Are Now Into ... !!!

OTHERS Too Now Think It's COOL ... ?
To Live Their Lives HIGH ON ... DENIAL ... ?!?

There HAS TO BE A BETTER Way ... !!!
To Nurture Seeds Inside Our Brains ...

MORE Depth of Mind WITHOUT The Lines ...
May Help You MORE I Think You'll Find ... !?!

LESS Thought of War MORE Thoughts of Peace ...
MORE Thoughts of Warmth Less Coldness PLEASE ... !!!

Turn Down Fallacies So That We Can SPEAK ...
About The Things We All Believe ...

Less Dividing And Colliding ... !!!

MORE Combining ...
Those Who STAND For MORE Than Grands ...

So That We Can Build SOLID Plans ...
That PROTECT Our Lands From HARMFUL Hands ... !!!!!

UNITE Humans From DIFFERENT Strands ...
The Game's To PLAY NOT Desecrate ... !!!!!

It's NOT OKAY To HATE A Race ...
Because They Move DIFFERENTLY To YOU ... !!!

There HAS TO BE A BETTER WAY ... !!!

Come On It's TRUE Just THINK It Through ...

Less Fights .................... In Sight .......
Would Be ALRIGHT And May HELP You Feel SAFE At Night ... !?!

Unless You're COOL With Life These Days ...
If You Are OKAY But Let's Get Things STRAIGHT ... !!!
Things Are NOT Okay Today RISING Hate Cos' Life's A STRAIN ... !!!

Less Youthful Veins Than ... WEBSITE NAMES ... !?!

MORE LIES Than Faith ...
MORE Killers Today Than DINNERS On Plates ... !!!

MORE Laws Than ... " States " ...
MORE Whores Than ... " Babes " ...

MORE Silicone Bits Than ... BIG OL' Dicks ... !!!!
SEE These Are Things That Make Me THINK ... !?!

There HAS TO BE ... BETTER WAYS To LIVE ... !!!
And YES Okay A .... BETTER WAY ... !!!
It's Just Wordplay At The End of The Day ...

But ... THINK About The Things I Say ...
And Things Now FOUND To Be DISPLAYED ...
By People BOUND By What They FACE In Todays NEW AGE ...

A World WITHOUT Millions of Pounds ...
EXCEPT For Those Who Gave Them Roles ...
That Fed False Hope And Ropes For DOPES On Which To ... CHOKE ... !!!!!!

Okay THAT Quote May ROCK Some Boats ...
But NOT In Ways That Systems SHAKE ... !!!

Systems Built To CONTROL Wills ...
And LOCK THEM Down Like MANY Now ... !!!

MANY MORE Than Years Before ... !!!
So Now The HOARDS ... APPLAUD The Cause ...
But Really AREN'T SURE What They're Clapping For ... !?!

Because They Choose To AIR The View That ......

... "Everything's cool, but i'm feeling you !"

.... "If you're feeling me ?
.... Do something dude, and face what's true !
.... Then maybe we can see less bleed,
.... and more succeed in finding peace !"

LESS Room For Greed And FALLACIES ... !!!
MORE SPACE For Plates And EQUALITY ... !!!

So That ONE DAY ...
We ALL Can Feed OUR FAMILY ... HUMANITY ... !!!

I Speak Sometimes Within My Rhymes ...
About UNITY But Right Now It's EQUALITY I'm Trying To GET ... !!!

Cos' It Seems To Me If I've Got ONE And You've Got ONE ...
What We Fighting For We're Both Still POOR ... !!!

Did That Line STUN Were You Thinking ... GUN ... ?!?

See That's The Thing It's Our Thinking That NEEDS TO Equate ...
So That Balance Is DISPLAYED In ALL OUR WAYS ... !!!

Now That's PRETTY DEEP ... EVEN For ME ... !!!!!

.... "Whoa, now i'm SCARED !"

So I Think That's Where ...
I'll Let My Pen Now Find The End ...

MORE TIME For Patience .........
LESS Spent On ... Ignorance ... !!!!!

MORE Upliftment ... !!!
LESS Time For ... DESPAIR ... !!!!!

MORE Commitment ...
LESS ... " I Don't Care ! " ...

LESS Thoughts of HATE ...
And Division of ... RACE ... !!!!!

LESS ... LUST For FAME ...
And A BLINGED' Out Range ... !!!!!

What More Can I Say ... ?
Well ... LESS GUN PLAY ... !!!

Cos' There HAS TO BE ...

........ " A BETTER WAY " ........ !!!

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