Betrayal

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95993
United States
39° 4' 17.4324" N, 121° 41' 48.2784" W

In the field where we once played,
Fairy flowers softly swayed,
But when breeze and blossoms met,
Like false friends, they fell away.
So did all my dreams for us
When a whisper slayed our trust.
Like the downy dandelion,
We drifted to despondent dust.

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