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Luis Vargas
Broken heart of mine by: Luis V
Lord, take this broken heart of mine
Take this broken heart of mine and heal it
Help me heal this broken heart of mine
God I admit i’ve been trying all these years to do things my way
And I realize I can’t do it anymore I need you in my life
My heart is shattered and I need you
I try to pick up these broken pieces by myself with my own hands
But I need you to help me do this because my hands can’t do it
I admit that me taking this road was easy
But look where it lead me too
It lead me to depression
It lead me to seeing the devil
It lead me to riding with the devil
And now I’m scared for my life
I can’t do this
It lead me to fight demons
And it lead me to become friends with my demon
My life flashes before my eyes everyday
The devil is talking to me telling come one already just commit suicide and join Lizzy
And I tell him no that is not what lizzy would want and I definitely do not want to go to hell
I know the Lord has a plan for my life and I want to complete
On top of that I have people to prove wrong who told me I’m not going to be nothing in society
So I have a lot of people to prove wrong
And I want to make God happy
So Lord please help me pick up these broken pieces of my heart
So I can worship you.
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MVP-Most Valuable Poet
Brother-this is so moving and heartfelt
i felt the sincerity, and cries of God''s guidance
this poem brings about hope and motivation to achieving greatness
today's verse of the day
Isaiah 40:31
" But those who wait on The Lord shall renew their strength; they shall
mount up with wings like eagles; they shall run and not be weary
they shall walk and not faint"
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did you watch my YouTube video?
Luis Vargas
Thank you, no I have not watched your YouTube video yet but I will soon and yeah I write my poems from the deepest part of my heart and my darkest part of my life
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
the poems that you wrote is allowing you to release everything filter in your system
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Luis Vargas
Yes, it really does honestly, I know I haven't prayed to God since 6th grade since lizzy killed herself and now I'm a senior but I know someone that can help get back on track and repair my relationship with God
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
did it ever crossed your mind that God/Jesus is using me to help you rebuild a wonderful relationship with God
what's amazing is that Jesus never turns His back on people
He change my life, He'll change your life
" For all things that are old have passed, behold all things are made new"
Luis Vargas
Yes, it did it's you, my youth leader, pastor, and this girl I've known since 3rd grade so I thank Him for sending good people to help me because I've been gone from him since 5th grade when I first tried smoking and I've never done it again after that but I never closed the doorway to that which kind of explains why I think about smoking everyday
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
don't think about smoking, think about the love of Christ, the comfort of His presence
His help and promise to guide your choices
poetry is giving you a platform to express yourself freely
no more shackles, no more chains, be free
do you read the Bible or have The Bible App?
God is sending people to edify to where you don't want to become what you despise
Luis Vargas
I have the bible but I only read it on Wednsdays and Sundays when I go to church, but in my free time I don't pick it up
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
2 Timothy 1:7
For The Lord didn't give you a spirit of fear, but a spirit of power and a sound mind
Luis Vargas
I try to read the bible in my free time but then I get sleepy and put it down and most of the time I don't even pick it up
Luis Vargas
Kicking out demons by: Luis V
I’m kicking out demons back and forth
I’m gunning my demons down
They were here talking shit
So I had to shoot them down
Told them they’re not welcome back anymore
I told you to leave me alone
I’ve battling with you guys for the past 13 years of my life
You tell me to give you one more chance
But I tell you no
I’m trying to find myself
I’m trying to search for he Luis I miss
Where is this Luis at I say to myself
I haven’t seen him for years
I haven’t talked to him for years
I miss you
I miss how I used to be really good at helping people
I miss being the supporter for people
But then people ruined it for me
They backstabbed me
They used me
They lied to me
They hurt me
What am I supposed to do?
I can talk to God
But I haven’t done that since 6th grade
My angel appears in front of me
He tells me God misses me
He wants me back in his arms
I told him where was he all this time
Where was he the past 13 years of my life when I was fighting for my life
When I conquered my demons
He told me he’s been there for you the whole time
You were just to blind to see it
I mean I do miss God a lot
My life hasn’t been the same
Since I left his arms
My life has been going downhill
I cry out for help to my angel
He tells me you should not be crying help to me
But to your creator
He misses you
And you miss him
The angel tells me I am one of the rare youth
With a humbled heart
And I need to use it properly
I told I will try and I will try to talk to God again
Then the angel smiles at me
And leaves
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MVP-Most Valuable Poet
God loves you, Jesus misses you
believe you me that God grieves just like you and me
the beauty is that He never gives up on you
Never give up in Him
when you go to The Lord, He'll welcome you with open arms
Luis Vargas
Yeah, I know my mom always tells me that, she knows that I haven't talked to him for a while and it all started when my mom and dad got a divorce, then it lead to me trying nicotine for the first time in 5th grade, then it also lead me to trying vodka for the first time in 6th or 7th grade I believe it was
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
A lot that you experienced from your mom and dad getting a divorce
your friend Lizzy committed suicide impacted you negatively where
you resort to nicotine and alcohol as an outlet to take away the pain
It did more harm than good, but poetry gave you an outlet to be productive and not
destructive.
read today's verse of the day-Luke 9:23-24
Let this verse edify you
Luis Vargas
Yeah, Lizzy was more than a friend she was my ex so it kind of impacted me more than a friend would have impacted me, she talked about getting married and having 2 kids
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
I understand
remember that God Jesus heals through times like this
read James 1:2
let this experience inspire kids to not commit suicide and draw closer to God
Be that inspiration to others
Luis Vargas
yeah that is true,
Dreams come true by: Luis V
Dreams do come true
My dream of achieving peace and happiness
Came true after 13 years
Life threw all kinds of shit at me
I got knocked down
But I never stayed down
I always got up
Always put up a fight with my demons
There were times where I just felt like giving up
There were times I didn’t even want to make it to the other side
There were times where my demons almost won this battle
I have no idea how long is 13 years is in the spiritual world
But in the physical for me that is to long
To fight my demons and obtain happiness and peace
But it was worth it
13 years of a spiritual battle without God
I was told that God should fight my battles
But where was he all this long
These past 13 years I’ve done everything by myself
I overcame my obstecles
I overcame my demons
I overcame my bullies
I’m in relief with this war
This war is finally over
My scars now have a story to tell
My scars I gathered over these past 13 years of my life
spiritually
My darkest part of my life will scar me forever
It will always be part of me
I can’t change that
It made me who I am today
It made me the fighter that I am today
It made me the Luis that I am today
People tried to drag me down
People tried to throw me to the wolves
But I came back leading the pack
The tables turned on them
I know the power within me
Motivated me to do this
Motivated me to fight for these 13 years
If I hadn’t done this I know
I would have given up when I was a 6th grader 7 years ago
I know that I would not have achieved peace and happiness today
So I thank god for being there every step of the way with me
Dreams do come true.
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MVP-Most Valuable Poet
what do you want to be when you grow up?
what's your ambition in terms of profession?
you have a wonderful gift of writing/poet
Luis Vargas
I want to be a computer scientist