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Drag me down by: Luis V
You could drag me down
You could knock me down
You could knock me out
You could drag me through the mud
You could throw me to the wolves
But I will always find a way to stand back up
I will find a way to make your life a living hell
I will find a way to make sure you don’t get away of what you did to me
I may come back dirty
But if you throw me to the wolves
I will come back and be the leader of the pack
I will come back stronger than ever
You can drag me down
You can beat me up
I will come back bruised
And I will kick your ass
Just to repeat it one more time
You can drag me down
And it will not affect me
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Conversation with the devil by: Luis V
I’m walking with the devil
I’m talking with the devil
He shows up in my dream
Flexing with all the gold he has
He told me if I were to follow him
I could have everything
I literally thought about it for a quick second
I told myself what the heck is wrong with me
And I told him no
He’s trying to tempt me to follow him
And to leave Jesus
I don’t know what to do
I’m not strong enough to fight the devil
Where’s my demon when I need him
After I said that my demon took control of me
And he told the devil to leave
The devil told him I created you
You cannot make me leave I am your maker
My demon told me no you did not create me
I followed you and instantly regretted it
Because now I don’t have a chance to go back to heaven
But I feel like I’m at peace when I’m with Luis
So I suggest you leave or you will another scar on your body
Like the one in your chest right there
As the demon nail scratched the devils chest
The devil screamed in pain because that scar hasn’t fully healed
The demon laughed at the devil and called him pathetic
He said maybe I should be the devil
Because you are a weakling what happened to the devil that was strong?
Is he still in there?
I don’t think he is because the devil I knew wouldn’t have gotten stabbed easily
So my demon stabs him again and leaves the devil in pain and screaming.
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Gun to my head by: Luis V
Gun to my head, I start to cry
Because I’m afraid I’ll lose my life
I ask the person whos pointing the gun to my head
Why are you doing this?
He says because it's about that time you join lizzy
I told him I don't want to join her not now, not ever
I want to live my life
I want to stop being in my thoughts about lizzy
I want to forget her
I just want to move on and be happy
So I tell you right now
Get the fuck out of my house and put that gun down
Because I have a gun of my own
He says oh yeah where is it
And then he turns his head to the right
He says my gun pointed at his head
He said when did you get that gun
I told him not to worry about it the point is I got it
So leave or I will shoot you down
I have so much anger if I shoot once I will shoot multiple times
I had this anger with me since I was a little boy
Now tell me do you want to die
Or do you want to live
He told me I’ll take my chances to die
But you have to remember you don’t have the balls to shoot me down
Like you did back in the day
I remember that one time where you mind had defense
And you shot everybody that tried to trespass
But remember that was the old you
That was the you who wasn’t a softy
Look at you now your a fucking softy
You lost those pair of balls you had to shoot a gun
Hell you haven’t picked a up a gun since then remember that
So you don't have the balls to shoot me now do you?
That may be true I haven't picked up a gun since then
That may ture I’ve gone soft
I've come to my senses and realize that I am a softy
Nothing can change that
Doesn't mean I won’t shoot you
So get out or die
He left
But then he pulled the trigger
The bullet hit my stomach
I see myself bleeding to death
But at my final moments I shoot him
I see the bullet and it hits him in the chest
His final words were
So you still have balls to shoot a gun.
I see the angel that was on my right shoulder return
He heals me and tells me
Everything is going to be ok so don’t worry you won't be dying today.
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