Tue, 05/30/2017 - 12:05 -- IndiaL

She could have asked for anything: Diamonds,Dresses,Dainty Delicacies. But she knew None of those things mattered.She had all she needed:A father's love,A mother's memory,Her beloved books. But there was one thing she wanted,Something so fleeting,And yet so bewitching.No one can truly possess it-At least, not for long,Though it's never stopped themFrom trying.And so, She requested a rose,Hoping to admire The one thing she could never have,Never realizing She was beautiful all along.

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The beginning line is very attractive. Alliterative nicely too. Your poem is super. Kudos.


Im a new poet here but have been writing elsewhere for ages so I invite u to review my latest poem too. Readers elsewhere tell me they enjoy my poems  lots so hoping u will too.

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