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Is there a reason why the wound covering my heart bleeds?

Do you know the reason?

People feel better when they hurt somebody else, right?

Why do your eyes look so distant?

 

In the depths of your heart, you pretend to not know

Isn’t that right?

Will you ever understand?

Do you even want to?

 

Welcome

This is the garden of suicide

Are you having fun?

Isn’t this what you wished for?

Didn’t you want to find a reason to live?

 

Before your eyes, a box

People’s lies lie within its depths


 

Is there a reason why the wound covering my heart bleeds?

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In the depths of your heart, you pretend to not know

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Welcome

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Before your eyes, a box

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