I ain't know it was possible to love someone so much..that they can send an electric shock through u with one touch....every time u see that person they make you smile....forget about all your Troubles. She's like another u, call her a double........just  looking at her beauty there's no denying that that it has to be from the divine....she walks with grace, absolutely  sublime.......the only question that pops up in my mind when I see her is when will u ever be mine......the answer to that question may forever be a mystery.....however the emotions I'm feeling for u will never be history.                                                       

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