although we fall down,god

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although we fall down,

god died for us on the cross,

so we won't give up

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brielle0ever

God saw LuCritia getting tired and a cure was not to be.

he wrapped his arms around her ,

and whispered "Come with me."

With tearful eyes we watched her suffer and saw fade away.

although we loved her dearly we could not make her stay.

a golden heart stopped beating, hard work hands to rest.

God broke our hearts to prove to us he only takes the best.

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