The Affect of Domestic Violence

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63303
United States
38° 43' 30.1332" N, 90° 33' 14.9364" W

Death beats at her household door,
as pain rings from ear to ear.
He shouts you ungrateful little whore,
her mind is anything but crystal clear.

Her body aches then aches some more
but then, her body stops dead cold with fear.
She sees her household door breaking down its core,
as she smells his horrid breath of liquor and beer.
Her body now falls flat on the floor,
as her face fills with tear on top of tear.
Now that death has got through her household door.

Comments

October Jade

Wow, such strong emotion. I loved it and I loved the rhyme scheme. Very very nice.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i agree
very strong emotion. domestic violence is something that affects all of us
needs to be address.
nice poem-keep writing

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