Acception and rejection

Location

60419
United States
41° 37' 51.4416" N, 87° 35' 38.2164" W

Love hurt when you gave it
And no one turn it.
Try so hard to show person that loves and care for them so much..
They rejected and make you feel so worthless
Like you don't matter
Like they could care less
like they don't gave damn
But My soul cry out for your love
but you still reject.
You act like I don't care for you I do.
Like my soul and heart is loss.
Hurts to know I mean nothing to you.
So I guess this goodbye to the times we had
Goodbye to death of you
To the bitter coldness of you
All ask of u to love me but u don't
you drag though the mud.
You make my soul cry.
And then you ignore.
I shout and I disappear with my soul broken.
I wish you so would come save me.
I am saying bye to all the hurt and pain by you
Goodbye

Comments

jwiener

I really like the title of this poem, because it has two opposite ideas, which adds to the questioning and confusion you bring about in the heart of the poem. Nice job! Check out "poetry writing tips" in the "resources" section for a bunch of tips and inspiration for all types of poetry!

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741