Abiding

Hope's door is closing

Seeing you crossing

The door is closer

As you are demising

Other side the mirror

The girl is abiding

As she gets reminded,

so she is glazing

Comments

saba24bay

7 years ago

The poet is about a girl who lost her beloved one. Although she saw the hope's door closed, she decided to remain strong and abide. This Abide made her grow and shine.

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