#5

I bet we'd be perfect, but maybe it's not worth it, they say you never know till you try, but trying could lead to a not-so-good goodbye, so I lie here in my bed, with only thoughts of you in my head, how I want you so badly, how I wish we'd fall in love madly, how I wish you'd want me the way I want you, but I guess I'll just watch it unfold, not much else I could do.

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jwiener

Your poems all have a similar theme, or are parts of the same story, but you are able to make each one new and exciting, which is a great skill for any poet to have.

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