the 1 Question....


United States
37° 35' 0.3948" N, 77° 25' 6.8088" W

will you be my shoulder
to cry on in times of need?

will you be my band aid
to heal me when i bleed?

will you be my oxygen
when i run out of breath?

will you be my lifesaver
when all i think about is death?

will you be my smile
so this depression can be undone?

will you be my water
to hydrate me under this cruel sun?

will you be my heart
to love me when i'm down?

will you be my laughter
so my face'll never frown?

will you be my girl
never to be replaced?

will you marry me
and share with me god's grace?


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