Longing

Fri, 07/05/2024 - 22:06 -- Vivin

How long, have you been on my mind 

I, 

Want you dead 

We’ll be dead before God 

How long, have we held on

How’s it feel to transcend time 

Knowing my love ended my life 

I, 

Well I, all my troubles may lay you to rest 

I’m sorry, for all the damage done 

How long, will you, be gone 

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