U OWE ME AT LEAST THAT

IF U COU7DL KNOW THE DEPTHS OF MY HATRED A RAGE KEPT AT BAY BUT NEVER SATED
VENGENCE IN MY VEINS I SEEK EMPTY PAGES KNOWN TO ME ARE THE FACES THAT HAUNT YOUR DAY DREAMS WAKING AS A PAWN IN SATANS GREATER SCHEME U DONT KNOW OF THE PAIN I SEEK UTTER DEFEAT FOR THE THIEVES OF MY HEART EVEN IF IT MEANS THE END OF ME I WILL SEE IT I HOPE YOU ARE READING THIS I RISE TO AVENGE THE DEAD DONT BE HESITANT TO WRITE BACK YOU OWE ME AT LEAST THAT

Comments

jwiener

12 years ago

By using only capital letters for this poem, you show the "rage" and "hatred" you write about, because it definitely makes the poem speak louder. Sometimes even just changing the way words are written or spoken, can change the tone and make a bigger impact.

Divine

12 years ago

It's about a close friend of mine that died tragically it really broke my heart and tho it was years ago it still affects me to this day thanks for the comment

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