A New And Better Me

In the year 2011, I was an immature young man like i wasn't acting my age, I was becoming more and more depress because I always blame on others but I should have been blaming it all on myself because I was the one with the main issues nd I was the one who needed to decide whether or not to fix my problems nd start my life over or just stay the same. So I made the decision that I want to start my life over and live my life the way I want to. Now it is the year 2012 I am a changed man like my life is actually greart because I lost 20 pounds about to start college on January 27,2012 nd everything has changed and more doors are opening for me and it just exciting because for the first time I am actually happy about my life and I want to thank my family, friends and everybody else that supported me through the way and a big thank you to God if it was not for me I would have never made that decision on changing my life thank you again GOD.

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jwiener

This poem made me smile. There are so many poems about the negative aspects of life, but you wrote about how the negative things in life can be turned into good things if we work hard enough, and through that we can make ourselves happy. Great job, and keep writing inspirational poems!

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