Waiting on the Outside

Do you remember me?

I'm still standing here

With every word I hear

My heart keeps breaking

 

I saw a giant wall

That's meant to keep me out

And I don't mean to shout

But my faith is shaking

 

And though you refuse to see me

And don't like what you see

Remember these word

I'm waiting on the outside.

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