Summertime madness

Fri, 10/02/2015 - 00:41 -- El Jefe
it's 11:11 an I wish upon a star as hot as you,
that's a bit shallow,
but your eyes are deeper, 
there is a meaning within you that I must find, 
but I am blind, 
for I can't get past the ocean in your eyes,
I'm drowning in your beauty,
girl those leggings are killing me softly,
I guess that's the true definition of murder to excellence. 
 

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