"Rude" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 26/4/2005

Location

United Kingdom

Some Youth Are SO RUDE ... !!!
Their Language Is Crude ... !!!
And Most Have A PROBLEM ...

The Problem Is ... YOU ... !!!
If You Are Like Me ...
and Won't Take Abuse ...
From Kids Who Walk Streets ...
With A ... BAD Attitude ... !!!

My Name AIN'T ... " B.A." ... !!!
and It AIN'T ... " Mr. T " ... !!!

But ...
Test Me With RUDENESS ...
and Then You Will See ...
That I Can Get BRUTAL ...
Just Like The ... " A Team " ... !!!!!

BRUTAL With ... "Tactics" ...
WITHOUT Prophylactics ... !!!

That's Just A Line ...
To Take Your Mind CAPTIVE ... !!!

My Words Are PROACTIVE ... !!!
To STOP All This MADNESS ... !!!

Young Kids Doing BADNESS ...
DEFINES The Word ... Sadness ... !!!

Sadness For MANY ...
When Mum's On The TELLY ...
With Tears In Her Eyes ...
Cos' Her Child DIDN'T Die ... !!!

Her Child Was A VICTIM ...
of Kids On A Mission ...
To Rob and Then KILL Him ... !!!!

And ...

Leave His Blood SPILLING ... !!!!!

That Story's Instilling ...
A GOOD Way of Living ... !!!

Young People ...

STOP KILLING ... !!!!!

And Learn To Be WILLING ...
To Do MORE FORGIVING ... !!!

and STOP All This PILLING ... !!!

and ... STOP Taking Life ...
Cos' Life Is For LIVING ... !!!!!

Rudeness ... IN VIEW ...
Can ................................ Isolate ................... "You" ........................................ !!!

Cos' Very Few People ...
Like Youth Who Are RUDE ... !!!

These Words Are The TRUTH ... !!!

Cos' Being ... "ALONE" ...
With ... NOWHERE To Move ... !!!

THIS Is Where RUDENESS ...
Is Bound To Get You ...

So ... What Is The Point ... ?!?
And What Do You PROVE ... !?!

Forgive Me ... I SEE ...
Walking In ... DEAD MENS' Shoes ... !!?!!

Just Watch An OLD Western ...
And See How They Do ...

There's ALWAYS A Gunman ...
FASTER Than ... YOU ... !!!!!

There's ALWAYS Somebody ...
Who's ... RUDER Than You ... !!!!!!!!

So What Will You Do ... ?!?
When YOU Are ... The VICTIM ... !?!

........... Facing A Crew ............

Who NOW Are The Ones' ...
Pointing Fingers At YOU ... !!!!!!

That's One FINAL Thought ...
On Which You Should CHEW ...

REMEMBER My Comment ...
About ... DEAD MENS' Shoes ... !!!!!

A Life of GOOD VIBES ...
IS The Way To LIVE LIFE ... !!!!!!
These Words Hold The ... " Clues " ...
To AVOID ............................ Dead Mens' Shoes ... !!!

THUS ... THIS Is My View ...
Shoes Are For WALKING ... !!!
So That's What I DO ...
Try Doing It ... TOO ... !!! ...

Try Showing Some LOVE ...
To Those Who LOVE YOU ...

And .....
REMEMBER These Words ...

There's NO NEED To Be ...

...... " Rude " ......

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