This Is NOT a cry for help, this is a cry for Freedom

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I wish I had lights floating around my head

Like the fish at the bottom of the ocean.

The most hideous creatures always hide

The most beautiful miracles…

At least then I would be able to see

The road ahead of me

And the dark would leave the

movement of my feet.

Living in the unknown:

The only unseen burn to the third degree.

Set me free.

Comments

Ahlam

Beautiful. 

darkpassenger

Short but I'm not criticizing... I really like it. 

thisispoetryproject

Thank you!

kenyajones99

that was good 

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