A New kind of Poem

Fri, 02/27/2015 - 02:46 -- azsxw1

We need a new kind of Poem

the ones that rhyme

seem to be old time

and the new ones

with blank and free verse

seem to ill practiced

sometimes you'll sit and read and

 

you swear that all this person is doing in their spare time is simply writing a novel with no significance what so ever and if you were to remove the line breaks were to sound just like an excuse for a run on sentance in a pros but because it's Poetry its ok for forget any sense of grammar and spleling orhowaboutspaces

 

and always any "awesome" author audiates alliteration

this needs to end

like the roads by the beach

whose sands hold but the crisps or yellows

kissing the blue that is crownned by the moonlight

who over sadows even the largest shining white stars up above

I mean come on I have read 100000000000000000000000000000 Poems to know you don't NEED a Hyperbole

their use of Litterary Devices makes you cry like a baby

they are a dead star

you see we need a new kind of poem

one that comes not from the terms

or cut and paste from a book

but one from the heart

not to just "be apart"

or to say "this is a start"

or even to look smart

we need a new poem

but I can't find it because

in a sea of freedom

the best things come and go

just as freely as you need them

This poem is about: 
My family
My community
My country
Our world

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