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A long seventeen years ago, there were things I had to forgo, moving around from place to place, the kids at school would never see a smile on my face, every other week going from house to house, staying still and quiet as a mouse,  I didnt know what the future would hold, until one day I decided to be bold. I decided to move in with my dad, since for all of the divorced kids it was the new fad, I made tons of friends and laughs, and finally got out of all the riff-raff, I joined hockey making big hits, now it seems I can't seem to sit. I feel unstoppable and on top of the Earth, and I am so thankful for my mom giving birth. Thank you both for the some sort of help, now it is time to do it all by myself.

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Blake Abbe

My favorite part is that it gets better through out the poem and isn't sad all the way through.

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