My Attempt

My Attempt
 
A Final Attempt to bowdlerize this 
pain I hold within my heart 
I will give a final start to make 
things right again 
 
I will stand up strong and hold on
to a victory is guaranteed to me
with many hopes and dreams 
 
 
It's an honest effort to do something
from my heart to yours 
I do attempt to bake a this anger we
had for each other 
 
I made a cake for you 
it may look like a disaster of a broken
field of beaten down pain I baked 
but please appreciate the effort anyway
 
but in this case please hold on to the 
good of what we once had in the past 
it's best to hope that my attempt is to
my things right 
 
I never attempt to start a fight with you
I just want to say I truly Love you .
 
 
 
Lilly Emery

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