Look At Me Now

All I ever wanted to do

Was make you proud

Its always been for you

The screaming and crying out loud

 

Pouring out my soul

Trying to be the best

It bears an empty hole

Deep inside my chest

 

Breaking me down

Tearing me apart

Gasping while I drown

In the blood from my heart

 

Look at me now

Who have I become?

As I take a bow

My act is finally done

 

Yet still I'm lost and empty

Not knowing what to do

The burning deep inside me

Has taken over through and through

 

Fear envelopes my soul

Hidden on my stone face

Life has taken its tole

With memories I cant erase

This poem is about: 
Me
My family

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