Look

Thu, 10/03/2013 - 15:26 -- Rockie

Look at me

Not just on the surface

Of the mirror

Look at my heart

And my mind

I pretend to be the person

You think you see

But is that me?

Who chooses to be happy everyday

I can't be

Don't ask me what's wrong

Nothing is I just need to be alone

My main problem is I think to much

For way to long

Just please look at me

But look deeper than ever before

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