I don't care

Fri, 05/23/2014 - 06:36 -- Lepux

While the sun sets

On the evening sky

I don't care

That you're not near by

Although

I've tried

So hard

To catch your eye

And all you ever did was make me cry

I don't care

As the stars in the night sky

Twinkle me a silent

Goodnight

I don't care 

If you wont say

goodbye

Even if I paint my Face and

Force a hollow

Spark

Into my eye

Still you won't

Notice the pain

That you force me to hide

So now

I just 

Don't care

 

Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart.  

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