HAVE YOU REACHED PERFECTION YET

Have You reached Perfection Yet  

'Your hand, clenching in mine 
and mine, clenching yours, 
You had a look that turn in like 
Dr. Hook, 
I see your face lit up like you saw  
The light of a paradise, 
a smile so rare that  
I must stare and stare 
to keep it there with a love of the  
Most high. 
Time at a still Life is simple, 
beautiful, wonderful, 
Oh, so wonderful like you, 
I mustn't blink, If I do this feeling  
of you will be gone, 
have you seen your perfection yet 
then he looked and said not yet!  
Having perfection is nothing you  
can ever reach; Only one man had  
ever exceed and that was Jesus. 
the greatest gift is love, 
this is the perfect gift from heaven above, 
this is true love.

Poetic Judy Emery © 1990
The Queen Of Darken Dreams Poetic Lilly Emery

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