Grief

Tue, 08/22/2017 - 15:19 -- TUS_Jay

America

Land of the taken, home of the cover it all up and don't say shit

Life is an experience
Don't live it so basic 
 

Make Haste, don't let your mind be wasted 

I see many people hating 

For some reason haters tryna test this

Why the fuck can't you respect it

I'm not giving pointless rhetoric

So don't test my intelligence

I want the world to fill embellished 

Not  a world filled with the selfish

I don't know why but i feel like i should start coaching

Let you learn a life lesson

Have you look at it like, life is a blessing

So don't spend it stressin

Guess your happy now that i am relaying this message 

This poem is about: 
My country

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