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My smile would probably hurt your heart with joy and laughter

With plenty of blushes and boat loads of contained blood rushes

Our dates would be walks on the Brooklyn Bridge

Our faith would be stronger than any man that ever lived

 

And you, would miss me when I went away

And you, would kiss me just so I could stay

And I, would be late to almost every event

Because of the extra time that you and I had spent

And we, would have never thought we’d fall in love too fast

Or that we, would say “we” like the grown folks had

But now it’s Misses “Whatshername”, I can’t hold what I can’t grasp

I’m going blank with no signs of pain, this might be sad

 

I’m getting cloudy; can’t seem to see what “would”

Guess my mind is fully rested; now the word is “should”

And I could, wipe the crust from the corner of my eye

But that would mean I have feelings, I’ll let this moment pass by

Comments

kaywhy22

absolutely brilliant.  You have an amazing gift

ncarter94

Thank you. I wasn't sure how others would like this one, but your comment made feel great.

GalacticOne

This is a wondeful poem. You display great poetic merit and I like the subject of the poem.

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