Eaten Alive

I gulp down the whiskey 
Wildfire on the way down 
Smell those fumes 
What is it really? 
Acid, Acid  
It dwells within me  
It eats me from inside  
All because I was free  
Perhaps I should have died  
Before all this started  
Perhaps you'd be happy, then 

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