Disparity

Tue, 11/21/2017 - 23:04 -- jdrudie

Stop and consider the chasm between us,
We two individuals, proudly  inconsiderate,                                        
And considerably proud, I understand the rust now,                  
I comprehend the busts of men in states of thought desperate,    

    
Your words were my dog chow pretend Monopoly currency
But I urgently passed go; I already felt them,                            
Ramping into the depths was appealing when I bought the car,
Then you revealed the disparity between you and my pen,
And I finally put an end to the

bridge

that

had

stretched

too

far.

This poem is about: 
Me
My community

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