The Boss is Dead (A fictional Lune poem 5-3-5 syllables)

Mon, 10/27/2014 - 23:26 -- frpass

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The boss is still dead
His name Fred
They look for killer!

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frpass

9 years ago

This was made for a Lune contest and was 4 short from a ribbon 11 reviews and 33 views, also some people thought it was funny because of the still word! What you thought he was coming back to life? I needed 5-3-5 syllables...

frpass

8 years ago

This just won a trophy on All Poetry Sept 30th 2015 (YIPPEE!)

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