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Luis Vargas
New Poem,
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Her last words by: Luis V
Her last words to me where “I love you”
My last words to her were “I love you too, be safe”
Little did I know, she was not safe
Little did i know she was suicidal
Little did she know how much I really meant it when I said be safe
I told myself these past years I can make it through the night
All I have to do is hug my pillow tighterÂ
I was hanging out with our friend last night Lizzy
Hope your watching me right now I told myself
My friend gave me a stuffed animal
She told me to press the footÂ
And I did
And what I least expected was to hear your voice
The stuffed animal had your final words to me
I went on my knees and started crying
I miss you
Her last words I didn’t know how to handle it
Her last were please don’t worry about me, I love you
I know I caused you harm, but tonight is the night where I leave you
It's like she knew she was going to kill herself
I made it through these years without you Lizzy
It was a wild roller coasterÂ
It was a crazy ride
I went through hell and back
I came out with a smile on my face
Because I finally beat my demonsÂ
I kicked out the demons out of my life
I stopped taking drugsÂ
I stopped drinking alcoholÂ
It's hardÂ
These were the things I only knew how to do when you died
I’m tempted everyday
Because the people I hang around with smoke and drink
It’s hard not to take it
Because it helped me escape reality
It helped me escape my pain
It helped me forget about you
It helped me
But now that I kicked out my demonsÂ
I don’t need those things anymoreÂ
I miss you blushing everytime we kissed
You made my day with thatÂ
Now that's taken away from me
Just remember this I love you
And her final words wereÂ
I love you too, as she blushed when we kissed
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MVP-Most Valuable Poet
you are a powerful voice brother
this is helping withstand the temptation of sin
God is blessing you to express yourself in a way that's compelling, and authentic
why don't you start a youtube video and perform your poems
you have a voice that can identify with someone's trials where although there are battles, there is victory at the end
Luis Vargas
I never thought about starting a youtube video, never crossed my mind, I just write my poems to express my feelings and to let go all of the feelings I have been holding in since I was 6 and now I'm 17 I turn 18 July 31st
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
something to think about
it gives viewers an opportunity to know who you are
today's verse of the day: Ephesians 4:2
Luis Vargas
Yeah, I might do it after I graduate in May because right now I'm just focusing on school so I can graduate and go to collegeÂ
Luis Vargas
Lizzy ended her life because she was being bullied like crazy I tried everything in my power to stop the bullying but it didn't work and when she asked me if I wanted to hangout the night she committed suicide I couldn't becasue I was at church, so I kind of blame myself for her suicide because I didn't see it coming, and honestly only if I knew she was like this I would've left church that day, so everyday I beat myself up for it because if i was there she would've been alive today
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
don't condemn yourself because you went to church
she made that decision to take her own life, which is devastating
her decision should not impacted you to the point of guilt, you're not the reason she committed suicide
this was something brewing for quite some time
has your school created a forum to addesss bullying? i don't stand for bullying
do you know if she told her parents, a counselor in school?
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Luis Vargas
She only told me these things in middle school, and I didn't tell anyone in middle school they never did anything about the bullying so I had to do it for her, and it didn't work wich is why it hurts me so much that she decided to take the easy way out, she was always telling me to walk down the narrow path for Jesus but she never did, and I got a gift from her friend last night it was a stuffed animal and she told me to press the foot of the stuffed bear and so I did and it was Lizzy's 15 minute final message to me, I cried like a big baby last night. She was being pushed around by everyone so I told them not to do it to her anymore so I took her spot of being pushed around and on top of that I got beat up for it, I received bruises for her and it saddens me that this did not stop her from committing suicide
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
i commend what you were trying to do by taking blows for her, but at the end, she needed to tell herself to walk in the path of Jesus
but in a way, it was good that she told you to walk in the path of Jesus so that you don't make that decision of taking your life
wwhy don't you be the advocate about bullying
bring awareness of bullying to your school whether it'll be a forum, an open mic event, at your church
be a spokesperson when it comes to bullying being unacceptable, talk about the meaning of love, acceptance, etc...
Luis Vargas
Yeah, my youth leader says I have a gift and he understands my pain what got him shocked the most was Lizzy because he never dealt with that, before but he prayed and told me what he wanted to hearÂ
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
the youth leader is right that you have a gift
use it for the Kingdom of God
it's incredible that he pray with and for you
i'll pray about you young brother, lift the idea of addressing the issue of bullying to Jesus
He'll reveal how you need to go about it
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
hey brother
did you by any share my videos to your congregation?
Luis Vargas
No, but I know my youth leader would love to hear it so I'll share it to him when I see him on Sunday
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
1st thing 1st
subscribe , like, and share
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have your youth leader listen to my videos
if y'all like , we can collaborate on doing a project addressing bullying
Luis Vargas
I'll talk to him about it, he's good at writing but he writes songs he has own podcasts where interviews Spanish Christian rappers, and he raps good as well
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
talk to him about it
have him watch my videos and let me know okay
Luis Vargas
Grief by: Luis V
I’ve been grieving these past 7 years
I’ve been crying these past 7 years
I’ve been trying to pick up my heart off the ground these past 7 years
I’ve been trying to forget you these past 7 years
I’ve been trying to move on these past 7 years
I didn’t ask you to come into my life
But I let you into the one thing that mattered to me the most
My heart
I let you into my heart
And you made me happy
You were there for me from the start of my mood changes
One minute I was happy and the next I was sad
One minute I was calm and the next I was pissed
The only reason I had these mood changes was because you were being bullied
I tried everything in my power to stop itÂ
But i couldn’t they kept continuing the bullyingÂ
Like I Didn't existÂ
I’m sorry that I couldn’t stop it
No matter how much you wanted me to
I’m sorry lizzy
I’m sorry that you committed suicideÂ
I’m sorry that I took those blows for you and you still committed suicide
Did me taking those punches and being pushed around for you
Mean nothing to you?
Did me getting bruises and me bleeding in my mouth
Mean nothing to you?
Did I ever mean anything to you?
When you told me you loved meÂ
Was that a lie?
Because I’m in painÂ
And I’m happy you are not alive
Because I know you do not like seeing me like this
New poem, called Grief
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
this is powerful young brother
do you have a contact number where i can speak to you Luis?
Luis Vargas
no, but I can download FB so you can contact me
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
that sounds good
Luis Vargas
OK, your username please
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
robert velez jr
request me on fb
Luis Vargas
Ok, I'll do it after I'm done with my homework when I get home, I can't believe I'm at my last year of high school already, I have nephews and nieces, i have a great cousin, I feel old now for a 17 year old
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
time flies
be the example to your niece and nephew
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when you're done with your homework-its no problem
Luis Vargas
Love is love by: Luis V
Love is love
I’ve been hurt
I’ve been heart broken
I’ve been cheated on
I ask myself if they hated me bad
Why didn’t they break up with me
Why take it to the extent of cheating to break me
I’ve had friends that talked shit about me
Anyways love is love and it needs to be shown
I was loved by family and church membersÂ
I was never loved by friendsÂ
So when people ask me if they wanna be friendsÂ
I turn them down by rejecting it
I still have trust issues
They said “why don’t you trust me?”
Why should I trust when my past shows that I shouldn’t trust anyoneÂ
Not even myself
Not even drugs or alcohol
I don’t plan on taking them anymoreÂ
No more weedÂ
No more beer or vodka
Love is love
And I love the people closest to me today
I have friends but very little
And I plan on keeping it like that until graduation
I haven’t dated anybody in 7 years
I haven’t kissed a girl in 7 yearsÂ
Until last week when one of lizzy’s friend surprised me with a kiss
I ran away because I didn’t know how to deal with that situation
It's been a long time since i kissed a girl
So I had to let it sink in
Anyways love is love
And show it because you never know
By showing love you might save someones life
I know this person saved my life by showing love to me
And she helped me from committing suicide
Smoking and drinking
And I thank herÂ
But now she's gone
new poem
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
i see brillianceÂ
i see genuisÂ
i see greatness in you
for those that hurted you 4give them
Luke 6:26-27
"love your enemies, do good to those that hate you, bless those who curse you, and pray for those to persecute you"
did you speak with your youth leader at church?
Luis Vargas
Yes I did, he said he'll look into your YouTube channel when he has a chance but about the collaberaion I forgot I have to tell him Wedsnday and I also made a new poem I'll send it your way
Luis Vargas
Please don’t kill yourself by: Luis V
Please don’t kill yourself
Before you pull the trigger
Before you take those pillsÂ
Before you put that rope around your neck
Just know that I love you
I know your importantÂ
You have so much to live for
Just know that your mom will miss you
Just know that your bullies will post a picture of you
And say what a wonderful person you are
Just know that God loves you
Just give yourself one more day
Give yourself to see what your life will be like
While I am writing this poem for you people
I have chills down my spine
Just know that suicide is a permanent problemÂ
To a situation that is only temporaryÂ
Just know I’ve tried to kill myself a couple years ago
And it got me nowhereÂ
I know what your feeling
Just know you will not get anywhere if you die
You will leave people heartbroken
You’ve always known that
People has been cramming those words down your throatÂ
Ever since you learned what suicide meantÂ
Just so you know I will miss youÂ
I love you
I might not know who you areÂ
But think about all the puppies you love
Think about the ice cream flavors you love
You will not have a chance to have those again if you committ suicideÂ
Just know you're not alone
I am here for youÂ
I am here with you
Just know that you are not alone in thisÂ
If you were bulliedÂ
I’m sorry that you went through that
But just know I’ve been bullied to
I’ve been bullied from kindergarten till 10th gradeÂ
Now I’m a senior in high school
No more worry about being bullied
No more looking over my shoulder
Just know if you do this
Your gonna regret the decision you madeÂ
Your gonna wake up in eternityÂ
I thought suicide was the only way out of my situationsÂ
But it’s not
I lost my ex girlfriend in 6th grade
To her battle of suicide
I’m happy that I didn’t committ suicideÂ
But I’m sad that she left me
She left me broken heartedÂ
She left me behindÂ
But now I’m regrouping and finding myself
Sucidie can impact the people you love in so many ways
Weather it’s broken hearted
Weather it’s crying for days, weeks, maybe monthsÂ
Just know there are people to help you
So please don’t pull the trigger
Don’t pop those pills
Don’t put that rope around your neck
I love you and I will always love you
God wants you to come back into his arms
He loves you and will always love you
So please don’t kill yourselfÂ
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MVP-Most Valuable Poet
powerful
you need to bring attention to your congregation and have an open mic event or a forum to address the concern of suicide
churches need to listen to you young brother
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
talk to him wednesday and ask if he saw the video, along with possible collaboration