Autumn's Child
Location
Autumn’s Child lives across the creek,
Among leaves of fire and blood
And Autumn’s Child creeps beneath the trees,
And paints his face with mud
The burning forest is his kingdom,
The golden meadows, his domain
And when the wind blows crisp and cold
Autumn’s Child calls down the rain
Through storms of amber leaves he stalks,
And whispers warnings to the wild things
Amid mushroom rings he sits and talks,
And advises the birds take wing
With haunted eyes and heavy heart,
Autumn’s Child will watch and wait
And when the shadows solidify,
Autumn’s Child will know his fate
One dawn will break Winter’s window,
And glass dust will frost the land
The ice will spiderweb the trees
Alone, Autumn’s Child will stand
Autumn’s Child will die across the creek,
Upon the skeletons of faded leaves
And Autumn’s Child will sleep until
His season wishes him breathe
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Poems about nature with such beautiful imagery must be an all time favorite. My favorite lines would have to be "one dawn will break winter's window, and glass dust will frost he land, the ice will spiderweb the trees. Alone, autumn's child will stand." absoulutely beautiful i look forward to reading more from you.
I absolutely love your personification of the season! I can just picture a little child running around doing all of this! It's absolutely adorable. (It's like a little movie in my head) I really want to read more of your work, any you suggest?
Becca.
Hello TevaMayer! I'm an intern here for Power Poetry, we were truly hoping we could use this for our multimedia? Of course we will always cite you as the author.
Becca.
Hi Teva--Rebecca meant recording your poem (voice or a performance) so that we can hear what it sounds like :) If you're interested, check out our tip guide on making multimedia poetry: http://www.powerpoetry.org/resources/multimedia-poetry
And this one, to get started! http://www.powerpoetry.org/actions/making-multimedia-poetry
Very vivid. I love your descriptory words, "burning forest," "glass dust," etc... Makes me anxious for fall and sort of already miss it at once. It's hard to write new and unique nature poetry, but you've done it.
Daraniashley
Your poem is the bomb.com......I'm seriously in love.
Are you going to become a writer?
I love this poem! It's classic without being a boring look-alike. The way you've written it reminds me of legends and folklore and prophecies. This is just really beautiful. Thanks for sharing it
angelalewis
Absolutely beautiful poem! The images are fantastic. Bravo!!!!!
The personification of Fall was executed cleverly. I really enjoyed this poem. By the way, did you take that picture, or did you find it? It's just because I thought it fit the poem and it looked interesting from the perspective it was taken.
Your poem is absolutely beautiful! The picture fits your words perfectly. Your work seems so genuine and so understanding of nature's majesty and mystery.
Julie.v
Amazing- breathtaking. I love the journey it took me on!