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I don't move with the seasons, I don't flow with the wind, but over time, still,
I change and reform, becoming apart of the landscape.
I rarely move, not even if the earth does, and not even with the people's will, do I move.
Hello! I am new to this and this is my first poem. The grammar isn't perfect and I'm not sure if this was the best way to set it out but please give me feedback on what you think :-)
