Poems from luciddreamer

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I am just getting into poetry. I enjoy the form of it, even though I hardly use it. Please give me feedback on my failures and times of effectiveness. My goal is only to become a better writer and see how others skillfully exhibit their craft.
In the hospital I died. Three pieces of my soul hovering above pseudo me. Staring down at the sheath that held together me three, I...