Poems from luciddreamer
I am just getting into poetry. I enjoy the form of it, even though I hardly use it. Please give me feedback on my failures and times of effectiveness.
My goal is only to become a better writer and see how others skillfully exhibit their craft.
In the hospital I died.
Three pieces of my soul
hovering above pseudo me.
Staring down at the sheath
that held together me three,
I...