Poems from brave-girl-thawing
I'm a freshman in college and I just started writing poetry. Any feedback or tips would be really helpful!
today I was driving and there was a
car in my blind spot,
not doing anything special,
just being there,
minding its own business,...
I am not good
at falling
I tense up,
every muscle in my body
a protest
as I try to stop the inevitable
try to control
the uncontrollable...
and for a moment you
pause
slow, steady, listen
the room would be so quiet
if there wasn’t so much blood
rushing
in my ears.
I look at...
my path is a well-worn one
I like walking on it barefoot,
slowly, lovingly,
my bare feet caressing
each and every shard of glass
my...
I want to write a poem about you - about your eyes and your hair and your dimpleand the way you look from below,sweaty, tender, beautiful...