Your only one

Fri, 08/10/2012 - 04:09 -- cbell93

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29445
United States
33° 0' 9.4068" N, 79° 59' 51.3312" W

Girl you’ve done the impossible
Took my life on a ever long roller coaster
Brought me to every up
Then shoved me to every down
Brought me joy
Showed me disappointment
I must say you’re the only one
You gave me heaven
And forced hell
Every good time
Came a bad memory
You’ve done the impossible
Showed me everything worth knowing
Then told me more
Girl we went through the seasons
Like we’re London
Froze time with your charm
Then set us to flames
Relationship was sabotage like ops
I put you first and fallowed the leader
Fallowing a daemon
But my heart said angle
Praying every night for a better tomorrow
But these prayers were never answered
Girl you did the impossible
Proved there was love
And brought the pain that fallows
Girl you looked good a minute
The other fifty nine tell another tale

Comments

jwiener

There are so many ups and downs in this poem that I actually felt like I was on a roller coaster while reading it, like you mention in the beginning lines. Emotional and honest, this is a great poem that tells the truth about how every relationship has its highest and lowest points.

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